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Message-ID: <CAGXu5jL21Jk7tKYnVULDskOKeq-QgQM6E0z6EuzmDMp5Sa2iBA@mail.gmail.com> Date: Wed, 13 Apr 2016 07:11:44 -0700 From: Kees Cook <keescook@...omium.org> To: Ingo Molnar <mingo@...nel.org> Cc: Ingo Molnar <mingo@...hat.com>, LKML <linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org>, Baoquan He <bhe@...hat.com>, Yinghai Lu <yinghai@...nel.org>, "H. Peter Anvin" <hpa@...or.com>, Borislav Petkov <bp@...en8.de>, Vivek Goyal <vgoyal@...hat.com>, Andy Lutomirski <luto@...nel.org>, lasse.collin@...aani.org, Andrew Morton <akpm@...ux-foundation.org>, Dave Young <dyoung@...hat.com>, "kernel-hardening@...ts.openwall.com" <kernel-hardening@...ts.openwall.com> Subject: Re: [PATCH v4 00/20] x86, boot: kaslr cleanup and 64bit kaslr support On Wed, Apr 13, 2016 at 3:19 AM, Ingo Molnar <mingo@...nel.org> wrote: > > * Kees Cook <keescook@...omium.org> wrote: > >> FWIW, I've also had this tree up in my git branches, and the 0day >> tester hasn't complained at all about it in the last two weeks. I'd >> really like to see this in -next to fix the >4G (mainly kexec) issues >> and get us to feature parity with the arm64 kASLR work (randomized >> virtual address). > > So I started applying the patches, started fixing up changelogs and gave up on > patch #3. > > Changelogs of such non-trivial code need to be proper English and need to be > understandable. > > For example patch #3 starts with: > >> Current z_extract_offset is calculated in boot/compressed/mkpiggy.c. The problem >> is in mkpiggy.c we don't know the detail of decompressor. Then we just get a >> rough z_extract_offset according to extra_bytes. As we know extra_bytes can only >> promise a safety margin when decompressing. In fact this brings some risks: > > Beyond the bad grammar of the _first word_ of the changelog, this is not a proper > high level description of the change. A _real_ high level description would be > something like: > > > Currently z_extract_offset is calculated during kernel build time. The problem > > with that method is that at this stage we don't yet know the decompression > > buffer sizes - we only know that during bootup. > > > > Effects of this are that when we calculate z_extract_offset during the build > > we don't know the precise decompression details, we'll only get a rough > > estimation of z_extract_offset. > > > > Instead of that we want to calculate it during bootup. > > etc. etc. - the whole series is _full_ of such crappy changelogs that make it > difficult for me and others to see whether the author actually _understands_ the > existing code or is hacking away on it. It's also much harder to review and > validate. > > This is totally unacceptable. > > Please make sure every changelog starts with a proper high level description that > tells the story and convinces the reader about what the problem is and what the > change should be. > > And part of that are the patch titles. Things like: > > Subject: [PATCH v3 03/19] x86, boot: Move z_extract_offset calculation to header.S > > are absolutely mindless titles. A better title would be: > > x86/boot: Calculate precise decompressor parameters during bootup, not build time > > ... or something like that. Even having read the changelog 3 times I'm unsure what > the change really is about. I'll rewrite all the changelogs and resend the series. Thanks taking a look! :) -Kees -- Kees Cook Chrome OS & Brillo Security
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